i love that way of getting information. it works nicely. awesome chapter, i hope you update soon!! XD

awesome! this should be good. i hope you update soon!! XD

Wow, this looks really interesting- and really good! Excellent Rorschach voice, I could hear him in every word.

One thing, this sentence: "Asks when nigh will arrive." through me off a bit. Do you mean he asks when the end will arrive or am I just reading it wrong?

Very interesting start. Don't be so hard on yourself; you've got Rorschach's voice down PAT. Your writing talent gives me hope for future goodness, and I'm actually looking forward to meeting said original characters. There's a lot of stigma about OCs, but I think they're fascinating as long as the author puts some effort into developing them. And, like I said, this is a well-written very IC first chappie, so I'll keep reading in hopes things continue to be awesome. Looking forward to more :)

I'm interested to see where this is going. :3