All right. The only problem I have with this story is that you recapped the movie in the first half of it. If people are reading this story, you should assume that they have seen the movie at least once. I admit-when I realized what you were doing in that part, I skipped it. However, the second part of the story made up for that. It was adorable! Chihiro and Haku are so cute together. :-) I've always wondered what happened after she left and I like to think she went back and saw him again. Great job, and if you ever think of revising this, I'd take out the movie recap in the first part. But other than that, great job! :-)

nice

Wow... that was fantastic!

INCREDIBLE word choice, alotta adjectives and adverbs. (My favorite style of writting to read! XD)

Hehe, GANBADE!

-Eige-Chan

I absolutly LOVE Spirited Away and i always wondered what happened after she left. I think this is THE perfect conclusion [should've been in the book and movie ;)] keep it up...seriously!

What a cute story! :3