Woo Hoo! Really enjoyed this. A bit of hurt Sam, a bunch of big bro Dean, brainy Sam, flippant Dean and a healthy dose of comfort at the end to satisfy this comfort junkie.

Nicely done.

good story.. I really liked this one

Haha, I loved the interation between the boys. SO funny.
I laughed out loud a couple of times.

It was short and sweet, and funny.
thanks for sharing! :)

That was awesome! I especially love the last line... haha, I'm still laughing over it. "My brother -- always one fruit loop short of a bowl." ... that is so priceless. I love it!

What a fun read that was! You did a great job capturing the boys banter and teasing and having them both use it to hide the seriousness of their predicament!

Sam's confusion and pain were palpable and I love the description of his struggle under the sewage water.

Lovely read and a little h/c is always welcome in my book so thank you so much for sharing this. Take care, Madebyme.x

LOL!! this story is greatness! LOL...

"Thank you, Noah," "One plus one equals ten-thousand Sea-Monkeys."

LOL! total greatness! lol...I'm glad Dean knows basic Bible stories and can do Math...lol...

good job! :D

I really enjoyed this story very much. It really covered a lot of genres and I loved the care Dean had for Sam mixed with the humour. The ending was funny too where Sam muse that Dean is one froot loop short of a bowl. Really great. And I adore the waiver at the bottom!

I really like the inserts of humour between the boys when the going is bad and how they encourage each other while Sam tries hard not to pass out. I'm glad there's more chapters.

And reat ending! Loved the last, little scene :)

Thanks for sharing!

L xx

LOL! :) Sam got bit by a cesspool Kermit. Loved how a sick Sam's mind goes a bit loopy and how Dean just goes with the flow of loopiness.

Ripping the toilet out at the end - priceless!

funny, funny and such a sense of humor! But creepy too. As always your descriptions make me feel the slime, hate the yucky water and generally just love your story.

And the fact that it seems like you've lived inside the story actually along with them is another incredible ability you have with characters.

I'm in awe.

Becky

Fun little romp through the sewers (ew, did I just say that?). I wonder how deep a frog bite can get? Yikes!

Thanks for sharing! I little a little h/c today!

:D
Caroline

Great start! I like the back and forth dialogue that is so Winchester - ignoring what's happening in front of them.

Kinda creeps me out that this is based on something 'real' though. Four foot Kermit does NOT make my day!

More please!

:D
Caroline

Loved it so far! Yay for hurt!Sam ^^
Keep it up!

Nice. Really nice :D Sam is great in this episode and Dean? Dean is Dean, what else can be said?

Can't wait to read the second part!

L xx