There have been very few times when I am completely silenced by a fanfiction. Mostly, it's in silent rage. I seriously think this is the first time I've been shocked by pure win.

This fic has got it's hilarious moments- but all throughout is an underlying sense of intelligence- something I have not yet seen in this category, nor anywhere else on this site.

I guess that's not saying much, because unfortunately there are way too may writers that have the IQ of a retarded broom.

Suffice to say that you, author, are my hero. Anyone who can fit a mention of Elysium into a Pokemon fanfiction must be extremely awesome. Please, update this/ finish rewriting it.

Well...! That certainly is different! Violet's not just late, but seven years late! I wonder where Jax comes in now...
Y'know, I'm enjoying most right now is the way you've integrated Poke'mon into Pallet Town's society. Uh, like Sylvester the Scyther. It's sure different in the view of them, in a way that makes sense especially considering they can talk.