This is REALLY cute. :D

You really got the boys in character. Nice job.

damn, i know this is like two years later and all, but i just wanted to say that this was fantastic. I love the Black Donnellys, and this was so in character for both of them- who are both my favourite characters on the show in any case. I really enjoyed it. So if you're still writing, and especially if you're still writing BDs stuff (the Supernatural story was awesome too), please post soon! There's not enough good fics for the BDs, and I like to have an author I can rely on in each of my fanworlds.

"Flames" ... ;) No I actually love it! I could see him being unnerved around her, it's great! And kinda touching too :D

Aw, it was cute. :) Too bad this show didn't go further, I love Tommy/brotherly moments.