I really enjoyed reading this story in its entirety with all of its twists and anguished moments. Glad you wrote it.

That final scene with the slashing and the blood is vivid and leaves the reader definitely wanting more. The scene prior to that offers some suggestions for possible answers for the dream as well as raising more questions. Nice.

Impressive opening scene. I like how the ligtning is matched with the electrocution.

I am really enjoying this story! I can't wait for the ending. :)

Wow. Good work. I'm curious about how you want to continue this one. Keep it up

Intresting story, not my usual fanfic fare, but very good, I like it alot!

Rob

This story really gets better with each chapter. Keep up the good work. (And please update soon)

Didnt see that coming, good job.

ok, so far, really good. I love Xander talking to Giles. Oh, but the part where Will and Xand are saying, "[he's] my love" is kinda well, not good. it's a bit corny. Mabey another phrase would be better

ok, chap 9 isn't there

so far so good. I am loving the song lyrics. "I've seen your face before, my friend, but I don;t know if you know who I am. I can feeling comming in the air tonight, oh lord. And I've been waiting for the moment for all my life, oh lord. Oh lord" sorry, got carried away there, I love that songb

ok, I just had to say this,I am so loving you right now. I adore Xander/Willow, and so far you are using excelent history. I am so looking forward to read the rest. ok, I'll review as I read, I usually don't do that, but I have a feeling that I'm gonna have to.

What is Xander getting himeslf into?

I really love this story. I can't imagine Xander ever hurting Willow. Look at how fast he is there for her in the story, even though everyone else is still pretty leary of her after the Dawn incident. And ok, why am I getting a Spike and Anya premonition? Please write more. This is great.

This is an excellent story, and although I haven't seen the movie, I am enjoying it greatly! I will have to hire the film! You are a talented writer and I loved the earlier references to past Buffy episodes and even Jesse! Please write quickly.. I will be checking back! (In my opinion, this fic should be rated a little higher than PG. Maybe it is the fact that I am home alone late at night... but some parts of the story are scary! lol) Maybe I'm just a wuss. -Little-Dawnie