wow beautiful!!

Yay!

Oh, I can't believe this got lost in my inbox! Such a wonderful character piece. You totally deserved the part. :-D

Thanks for sharing! Hope you're doing well.

:-)
-LilRicki (aka Pansy Chubb)

That was incredible! I felt like I was either there watching from the sidelines, or trapped within her body feeling everything with her without being able to control any of it. You definitely deserved to get the part :).

Absolutely incredible.

Nice descrtive without being flowery. I like the strong and feminine warrior image.

Lovelybeautiful. Teyla meditates in motion, and her musclesheart are wise. She is fathersdaughter, masterfriend, strong through repetition and tradition, freeconnected, solid: there.

Macte et bene factum!

Great story! Good imagery.

man, i am so not surprised you got the part! congratulations, on both that and a nice, small, but intense story!

And you deserved it! The part that is. Great description of movement and purpose - apreciate the background to the Bantos ritual which the show neglected to provide :D Love your Teyla voice ... look forward to hearing more of it at our RPGs! Cheers.

I really loved this one. You could almost see it.

Unequivocally, the part is YOURS.

Of course you got the part! Your Teyla is the goddess she was supposed to be in the show but almost never was.
P.S. I love all your stories! May your muse be forever with you!!