I really liked it. It was true to the story in message and tone. Really good job! I really enjoyed it!

That was so sweet! I almost cried!

still sad why winnie why it makes me sobthey only have love for each other and it can never happen...this is why i like twilight better.

aww this was so adorable! the movie made me cry at the very end but i was left hanging. You definately captured Winnie's emotions well in this, why she really didnt drink the water. Awesome job and keep it up XD

Finally! i hated the end of the book because it hurt jesse so much i am really glad someone wrote a nice alternate ending.

I'm crying right now... beautifully written.

Okay.I admit it.I cried at the end when she was about to die and she saw him.That was sad.Sweet and Sad at the same time.Awesome one-shot!I L.O.V.E.D it! :)

all i can say is that you write amazingly well. maybe you should consider writing as a profession

OMG
So sweet.
Ugh.
I just watched the movie cuz im reading the book for school and omg i was so mad she didn't drink the water.
Anyways nice story ^^