Hey, where ther rest of this? I gotta know what happens next! I love the idea of Nick having a daughter. :-)

Nice twist on cannon. I can't wait for Nick to see his daughter.

amazing story loved all of it i cant wait to read more :P please update soon :D

Wow, a great start! Don't stop there as I really want to know about Nick's daughter. Other characters are in place and you descibe them well. More! More!