PART 2 PLEASE!

This was amazing!

aw
i loved it!
so sweet! (L)
GREAT! congrats!

Oh, God, poor James! Being the mature one doesn't come easy. Hope to read the decapitation of the boy soon :)

haha this is hilarious! I cant wait to get Lilys reaction the next day. Please update soon!

love this =]
update soon!

Lily's such a hilarious drunk. The line that killed me was "She looks disappointed, he notes. It makes him happy, which makes him ashamed, which makes him confused. It’s a ** vicious circle." Vicious cycle indeed. It's so ironic somehow since James loves her since like the beginning of time and when he has an extremely overeager Lily who really wants to literally fulfill his DREAMS he has to be a gentleman and stay with his morals. But if he didn't I guess it just wouldn't be him. Update soon, her reaction is definitely going to be epic.

I think it's great! I really liked it! Great job! Update soon!

it's so good! i'm absolutely speechless. i love James. funny and sweet, perfect.

OMG this is so beyond fantastic :D well done! plz update part two soon pretty pretty please with a "yummy" "ragey" james on top :P

LOVED THIS! absolutely amazing, can't wait for part two :)

well at least this is more than a oneshot... update soon!

~Serindraxx~

Beautiful I can't wait ot read the next on!

Oh you need to update and soon!
And here I was thinking your story from Lillers' POV are the best. How mistaken I was! Your charecterisation of James is perfect, beautiful, funny and so sweet! I'm in love! Do you think would mind if I borrow him? I am actually off to bed?

Drunk Lilly is to die for! Can't wait for the rest!

Great job once again, please update soon :).

Wow, this is a really good piece. I like how you portrayed James, and the whole chapter is so interesting. =] I guess my only complaint would be Lily's utter corniness... she seems so silly and aggressive, which doesn't seem realistic, per se. It seems like a drunken Lily would attempt to maintain some normalcy (but epicly fail).

But anyway, the slight weirdness in her character didn't detract from the entertainment factor. :D I really, really enjoyed this, and I'm looking forward to part two!

Love love love this.
Please update? :3