That's...very interesting. Very, very dark. Who'd have thought Asha and Max. Odd. Intriguing, though, somehow. Unique look at the three characters; interesting look into Asha's past. I like that you gave Asha a little bite...she's gotten such a weak portrayal so far on the show.

Good fucking God, that was freakin' fantastic. Made my pulse beat to your syncopated, ikrsome rhythm, made my breath rough and short with fearful anticipation. And oh my, you are a God, and oh my, how you did make me feel and feel and feel. This was Asha in pain, in anger, in sorrow, in remorse. This was Asha touched and untouched, loved and unloved, wanted and unwanted. This piece was Asha alive, feeling it, bruised and debauched and oh so God-like and vulnerable. Excellent piece.

Wow. Holy freaking wow. I'm very, very, impressed. Slightly incoherent, this was. But it was a good kind of incoherent, the kind that makes it a little surreal. Excellent stuff. . .bitter and slightly creepy and evil all at once. I'm still impressed. *grin* Hugs and Nobel Literary Prizes. . .