I thought this was nice, although somewhat OOC. Foog job though.

I definitely have a soft spot for J/P, and enjoy stories that focus on their relationship (romantic or otherwise). Interesting how everyone seems to know how Tom feels -- instead of wrapping up the story so quickly, I was curious if Janeway realized how Tom felt too (without overhearing him).

Honestly this seem rushed.

ek! I so loved this. To bad the captain can go after Tom that would be funny. I can't wait to see where you will be taking this next.

It's warp core not worp core.

This is a great story! I'm not always a fan of J/P, but this is very well done - a brilliant read! Please update soon!

I hope the captain gets back soon.

oh please update soon. Want them together so bad. Oh please check out mine too. For Naomi.

Hey, great chapter, keep up the good work, I really love how the story is going.

I guess I'll review since you ask so nicely...

Very interesting idea. I'm very excited that there is now some new, well written J/P out there. As long as you aren't hung up on there being a huge age difference between them, it is a great pairing. I love the flirting between them in the first season!

I'm really interested to see where you are going with this. So far it you've done a nice job of getting us involved.

Hey, great beginning, hope to see more chapters, keep up the good work/

interesting perspective. I thought Janeway had a soft spot for Tom... and he had one for her...