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Reviews for: The Stuttering Stallion: Eye of the Storm
Bronx Shogun
2009-06-01 . chapter 2
I hate to break it to you Xin, but Shizai won't be coming back this time around. Lol.

I'd bow to you and your magnificent writing skills with this, but you wouldn't be able to see it through the internet so I'll say bravo.
Crystallia Silver
2009-04-29 . chapter 1
While I was reading, I realized how much I had missed Deng Ai and Chen Xin.

The extended freedom of the M-rated domain appears to have let you strengthen the sense of realism in some subtle behavioural patterns of the characters.

I have been very interested and many times I tried to imagine how the couple would be during their personal moments and how they would express their sexual need for each other. I am glad that they reached this essential part of the relationship naturally, inspired by their feelings and the intensity of the moment, later in the chapter.
Bronx Shogun
2009-04-28 . chapter 1
Sex scene FTW.

Seriously though, this was great, the thoughts of Shizai, Zichu and Xin were well thought out. But I was hopping some from Yang Xin and Shi Zuan to be honest.
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