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Reviews for: The World's Ruin
Kyogre
2009-05-11 . chapter 1
~ Interesting~! Tales of Vesperia fandom is still very new, so great fics are especially welcome! (Of course, great fics are welcome anytime, anywhere, but ToV is particularly needing)

I have a soft spot for the "Great" Flynn, so I'm especially interested. Plus, the category choice sounds promising. I have to admit that I'm too used to stories where the war in the backstory was far back, before any of the characters' generation. I actually have to keep reminding myself that yes, these people were alive during that war. (And that, yes, they're ordinary people, not really hundreds of years old, or anything like that) It's actually kind of odd for the young Ioder to have been involved...

But, wow, you don't pull any punches, leveling an entire city just like that.

I'm really interested to see how things go from here~
Caoeuti
2009-04-29 . chapter 1
Omg! I'm too lazy to login. Ha ha~

This looks so good so far! I can't wait to see how it plays out. I did spot an odd grammar error or two, but nothing you can't squint for.

Hoping this turns out well =)
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