How very appropriate for Halloween! You deal with Bela and Dean's antagonistic relationship wonderfully, going from sniping at each other to sleeping with each other to caring for each other. If only the PTB had been brave enough to actually follow through on their original direction for Bela, we may have seen something like this fic onscreen; it has a very true-to-the show feel to it. A weekly monster, research, getting beaten, yadda, yadda, yadda. The interaction is perfectly in character, too. This is much better characterization to Bela than I've seen elsewhere, including the show. Loved it!

OH wow. Long time no see Nadin :) I just kinda fell outta reading some fanfiction for awhile then came back to it but had no interest in the Supernatural fanfiction and so on, because I missed a lot of the episodes ;[ Good to see that you're still writing.

I'm up at 3:39 AM reading this =P so I only read the first chapter (which is good). I'll try to read more but no promises as I've been really busy irl but I'll try.

wow hun! ok i finally get to finish your story :) it was wonderful i have to say even when you totally broke my heart with that ending scene between Bela and Dean XD such a Clois moment, am i right? anyways i think you did great and i could picture this happening on the show because i knew Dean wasnt gonna risk to get into a relationship with Bela knowing he didnt have much time left so you wrote it perfectly! i also love the choice of words for your last sentence it was the perfect closure and it actually made me sad hehehe but this was really good overall as a story. I still believe this could be put perfectly into a Supernatural book :)) I can even picture a cover and all XD

loved it...granted the ending was a little sad, but cute. I liked the coffee scene w/ him calling her and them both lying (kinda a little throwback to smallville's infamous for me).

so yay, great job, as usual!

Alright I'm not sure how I feel about that ending. But I loved the whole thing! Love your stuff and can't wait to read more.

oh crap! you cant leave it there WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING? when when when? lol anyway this was awsome hun! i love the little bickering between sam and dean and also the lovey dovey scenes between bela and dean in the begining i wont ever get tired of that XD i hope you update soon. I cant wait to see how this story ends.

ok first review coming up! lol you know im really curious about the whole storyline you have built up here. You know this looks exactly like a spn episode except for Bela and Dean working together of course heheh but the story could be easily put in one of those SPN books. Is really good hun you should be proud. I also love the interaction between Dean and Bela youve got here. I mean they kiss each other and are kind of having something there but that doesnt mean they can stop bickering which i think is great hehe i loved the ending of this chapter. Dean is deff good for something more and Bela knows it ;)

I love this story. Bela was perfect for Dean, especially in season 3, when they were both having the same problem

Hope you update soon

great as always...

can't wait 4 update

just a point though ...read before you post some words had wrong letters in them if you read back you'll know wot i mean

Hey nice chapter. Loved the bit with Dean's nightmare! :P. Bela and Sam are so funny.
“No, actually we heard you coming and Dean decided to hide,” Bela told him with mock seriousness. “He’s in the upper drawer of the nightstand, you can check.”
Haha! Brilliant! I have no idea how it will end but I can't wait to see!

yay! Nice chapter. All the dean/bela interactions were great. I can't wait to read more and hopefully they find dean before he does something stupid :)

great chap! i cant wait for the next! update son!

Yay a new chapter! Loved it!! Great job, can't wait for more. The interactions between dean/bela keep getting better each chpt.

Really good chapter! Loved it. I think they're so cute while maintaining that love-hate relationship. And Sam is hilarious! Can't wait for the next one! :P

Aww, Dean and Bela are so cute together! I just love their love/hate relationship! And it's so amusing seeing them fighting and arguing like two small children, so cute...
Damn, I love your fics, your writing is so unique, yet, amazing. I love how you describe everything, I can easily imagine every scene, it's just like I'm watching the third season again - a very, very, very improved third season. I have to go tell Kripke to shut the hell up and hire you to write the script, hehe :P As soon as I have more time to read the rest, I'll leave another comment. Please, keep posting, I love this fic :D