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sparkysdreamer
2009-07-18 . chapter 13
Giovani Rossi you are such a B tease...making her all famished for you and dangling that carrot in front of her on a string only to pull it away...argh but it'll keep, improve with the wanting I guess so Betty you want perfection you have to wait...hmm, and never forgetting the Gio voice...I can hear it in your tale as clear as I hear my own...wonderful...
sparkysdreamer
2009-07-18 . chapter 12
Oh what a chapter, Gio on a platter, I'd dessert him and no mistake..and he's planning their 'first time' is this man a aint or what..oh yes he is...Oh is there nothing he doesn't excel at...oh yeah of course...singing but who needs Barry Manilow when you have The Guy...on to chapter 13...whoope!
Beatrice Benedick
2009-07-18 . chapter 13
oh Betty she can't help feeling so much for this young guy. The van was about to caught fire... Gio as always, being proper and wanting to make the most of their relationship saved it. Thanks for all these quick updates. It was fun!
Beatrice Benedick
2009-07-18 . chapter 12
hahaha... you write young Gio so sweetly. He's totally crazy for this young Betty. Dinner time at the Suarez seemed to go alright and Gio was a total gentleman.
Beatrice Benedick
2009-07-18 . chapter 11
This was intense. They got into a fight and Gio got the black eye... hahaha... typical. Oh Betty is so silly sometimes but, she's just a girl.

Thanks for this long chapter.
Beatrice Benedick
2009-07-18 . chapter 10
sweet cheeks. lmao!
oh gosh Betty is cute.
Maria7992
2009-07-16 . chapter 13
Misspiggy I laughed My ass off reading the part of Henry hiding behind the bushes...that's embarrassing lol but i love the drive in date and I thought it was soo romantic the part where they went to the beach to watch the stars *sigh* how beautiful!

I also laughed reading Livia's review

"Wow, Betty's starting to get really horny, isn't she? Gio has way more self-control than your average teen-age boy, I must say. Ha-ha"

I have to agree with her lol can't wait for more diary entries :)
Maria7992
2009-07-16 . chapter 12
Wow misspiggy you are one fast updater its had to keep up with you! but i love it :) the last cahpter was awesome! the fight haha and this chapter was just so damn cute and romantic! wow Betty wants her some Gio soon lol I can't believe Gio wants to wait even after telling her he wants her for dessert...He's such a tease haha! really awesome chapter Misspiggy
Livia55555G
2009-07-13 . chapter 13
Wow, Betty's starting to get really horny, isn't she? Gio has way more self-control than your average teen-age boy, I must say. Ha-ha to Henry among the trashcans--I could so see him with his glasses on crooked! Wow, I was really excited that Gio found a drive-in to take Betty to. I remember going to those with my family when I was a little kid, but they were pretty much all gone by the time I became a teenager. It's so cool that Gio was able to produce one to get romantic at! A very novel date. And then the beach--of course it reminded me of Gio's "If I loved a girl" speech with its mention of sleeping on the beach at Montauk. Gio's quite the romantic, but I'm beginning to wonder when he's going to make his move!
Livia55555G
2009-07-13 . chapter 12
"Gio is the best boyfriend ever!"

Can't add anything to that--when Betty's right, she's right!
Livia55555G
2009-07-13 . chapter 11
Oh my God, the angst! Really, there's no romantic angst like high school romantic angst, because at that age you haven't been through it before, so you fear whatever goes wrong you may never be able to fix and that nobody can ever replace the person you love, because you've never been close to love before (Henry obviously doesn't count!) I find this Betty and Gio so REAL! And high school happy endings are unique, too, because you can't imagine the ups and downs to come, when you're feeling that unbelievable joy for the first time. Like this:
"Anyway, everything’s been sorted out and we’re back on track YAY! He walked me back home and left me on the door step with the most softest and loving kiss ever! Ohh I’m never going to doubt him again – I don’t ever want to lose my baby, Gio!"
Gio fighting Henry--cool! Who knew Henry was such a stalker?
Livia55555G
2009-07-13 . chapter 10
Continued greatness, Steph--I've gotten behind in this and catching up now. You really capture the language of a teenager's diary well. I totally believe in this puppy love Betty and Gio. They're so sweet!
Rltsweetie22591
2009-07-12 . chapter 13
Betty getting horny?

Although we spoke about it I forgot about what was going on and I didnt see THAT happening :D loved it as normal
starletlaur
2009-07-12 . chapter 13
Aww misspiggy! Another brilliant chapter. HAHA. Oh dear Henry, that is really pathetic looking through the window like that. And shame that Betty didnt talk to you...
Gio just keeps getting more and more romantic doesnt he? SWOON.
The bit when they go to the beach is lovely, all snuggled up together watching the stars. It reminded me of the moment in A Walk to Remember. Totally lovely. I'm still loving this story, can't wait to read more!!
sparkysdreamer
2009-07-10 . chapter 11
Oer Gio and Henry fighting but hey there are ways to make someone the same height but I digress...ooer what a passionate Gio and so young as well...don't you dare ruin this Betty Suarez you're really stupid it's possible...this guy is a st...but we all know that...
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