eh i can't imagine her being so unhappy about all that that'd she'd resort to drinking.

nice first chapter. good intro.

Aw... i love the story! please post more chapters soon, really can't wait for new ones to come up. :-D

Oh. Crazy talk! You're talking to me in crazy talk!
THEY ALMOST KISSED!! Poor Shin, I hope he'll be okay. It'll all be okay in the end Shin!! It always is! Or..normally, anyway..
I can't wait until the next chapter is out!

yo girl ...so hot...update soon

we~~
i love it :)
yankumi loves shin <3

i love that song from arashi.
goodluck for the next chappie :)

my gawd!! during the almost kissing scene i was like "KISS!!.. KISS!... KISS!..." but they didn't grr... i really hate it that shinohara is getting between the relationship of shin and kumiko TT^TT... I really like shinohara but i love shin! shin should have just taken initiative! be more daring!! make kumiko yearn for you!! you deserve it!!

please keep up the hard work can't wait for the next chapter!

so uhm now i want some curry! i am sure u are goin to gracious enough to give out the recipe my mouth is watering for curry..delicious curry..yum yum curry...curry...m curry...curry...some of that roti sounds good to...curry...foam at mouth...

*heart*

This is really really good! =^_^=

*heart*

Hihi. Sorry sorry sorry about this. I'm a crazy proofreader.

"concernedly" is not a word and maybe a comma before the word.

When Kumiko drinks the water, "came" instead of "got" when she speaks is better.

When Shin tells her "that's why, be careful", "you should be careful" sounds better than "be careful".

There are several more that I'm too lazy to explain. These were the easiest. Really, these are what I, personally, think sound and look better. You don't have to listen to me. Actually, if you need someone to proofread, let me know. My e-mail is . I'd be happy to help. I've never offered to do it before, but I see ALOT of potential.

Anyway, I like it soo much. Yum! Indian food. Ahaha. I love how she gets pissy at Ucchi. It's great. Made me have a good laugh. I can't wait for those salsa dancing classes. I'm getting giddy over it. Update soon! E! I loved that last sentence.

- Z.

Oi, it's "Zee" from that Matsujun comment.
Wanted to let you know that you repeated "That way you can rest after school" in this chapter. Not to bother, but you should get around to changing.

That being said. I love where this story is going so far. I hope you don't stop writing this or any other. I'll be looking for more works from you. :D The writing style is simple, but descriptive enough so that it's not overflowing with excessive dialogue. Though normally I would enjoy a little more description (for example, instead of dialogue of the lives of the first 3D students, there be a paragraph saying shin is talking about it and then to the part where yankumi says it's like seeing children growing up or when she says he needs to tell her why he didn't call), I like it.

[btw: I'm an extremely picky reader. I'm glad to find something I like.]

Totally going on Story Alert.

You should've put something about Kumiko thinking Matsujun is cute. ^^

the ending was so weird and funny!

yay..sawada! really good chapter! liked it!

haha twilight...
amazing series. :)

i like the idea of them dancing
very romantic. :D
great job!