 PhantomInspector 2009-05-06 . chapter 1I am so tempted to write some follow up to this and your other story "Another One", with your permission. Not a hundred percent sure I will, but the plot bunny's hopping around in the back of my brain. That's like, what, the first in a year? *headdesk* The repetitiveness and the linking of sentences with the same ending and beginning words sure made my head spin. Need a happy place!! |