 JuseaPeterson 2009-04-27 . chapter 1I liked this. I like how you got into Ziggy's mind, poor guy, I did feel bad for him with the others' reaction, except Dillon of course. He had no choice, and he didn't want to be a ranger.
I like the interaction between Ziggy and Tenaya 7, it was interesting, and I think you got them just right. Great job. |