 lily moonlight 2009-05-02 . chapter 1Wow, this was a long oneshot! *coughhopeyoucanwriteanicelongNYchapteragainsooncough* If you can read all that, I applaud you XD Sorry, again, but you know I have to put all this, and hopefully my rambling and nagging reviews can entertain you, that's my main aim. Seeing as I'm sorry, but you can't quite drag me away from NY yet, even though I will keep my promise to write an SGA fic if you finish your other stories. Yes, really.
Great title, I like that, and it fits the story perfectly. But again, what is it with torturing poor Rodney?! What has this guy ever done to you? From all I've seen of him, which I admit isn't much, he's very sweet and unassuming. *shakes head* Character torture. What fresh hell is here for him? Oh no, drugged and badly injured. At least you let him escape from it all though, unlike a certain other character, well two of them actually, from another TV show...
Sorry, sorry. Sensible review! But I'm reading traitor stories here!! As always though I love reading your stories, and this one too is a finished one :P You draw me into the story and the characters, and the situation. I got a real sense of Rodney's panic and confusion, and the fear of the others around him too. That was sad too that he had to grieve again for Carson, very poignant. Loved the humour of the last line though, that worked well. A small request from a loyal reader now, please update your other stories! Please! Okay, i admit, i've drunk caffeine this morning... Hope this makes you laugh anyhow, and does not offend :) Lily x |