Damn, I never got bored of your HizuxAyu fics ! :DD They're only getting better and better, the characterization and writing style and all the emotion you manage to get through... I was smiling the whole time, from bitterness or from cuteness but always smiling. It was just amazing. *dreamy sigh*
The part when Ayumu is thinking, and "Moments later, Hizumi’s got Ayumu on the floor and he’s laughing and, oh god, is this kid supposed to be the devil?" are my favorite parts, but there are a bunch of others I adored as well. This was just so full of emotion, I thought I could get exactly was Hizumi was feeling. :D

Aw, this is so cute, I like this story alot. Hizumi and Ayumu make such a cute couple. Anyway, I like this story and I hope you will make another story with this couple again some day.

*Butchers canon with--and submits first review because she can do it TWICE now*

O, yes; formatting is much better. *Claps* (LJ has a bad tendency to screw up entries =X It did it to me a few times.)

And I'm just sitting here through the entire thing going: "GIVE IN. IT'S SO MUCH EASIER TO JUST GIVE IN."

La la la...now I can favorite (something my baka procrastinating self hasn't done since her mind went "Hey, let's favorite!" *Whacks self repeatedly*)