aww you could really sense the silbling love. Keep going please, this is awesome!

this is really interesting story...very different, keep up the great work :)

You're gonna continue, right? Please. :)

Love the story so far
Can't wait to see what happens next
Keep up the good work.

oh my God please continue

This is really really good!! Can't wait to hear Jake's reaction.

Well you got my attention!