It's a good story. keep it up.

This is an incredibly moving story you wrote here. Very realistic, and isn't the Varia arc the saddest of all ? I like the girls' bond, and you depicted it very well here. Thank you for this bittersweet moment of reading !

It's sad...but I like it. Before they knew the truth, the girls are the one who hurt. They just guess what the boys do, support the boys with smile on their faces to hide their worries, pretend they both are alright, and something like that. They support the group but no one to support them both. At that time, they just had each other. I think that's what I get by reading this story. Although I'm not a yuri fan, this one is great :)

Ohh, this is cool!

I really doesn't like this pairing[or anithing Yuri], but this was pretty good. I like it!
So cute! >.<

Kisu's ;*

See, this is one of the rare fics that actually makes me like these girls.
I like the way you write them, and the slight love hints you put in there were beautifully weaved in the rest.
very nice fic.