wow i just found this fanfic, and to be honest, i absolutely love it! Especially with Niall.
And you left us with a semi cliffhanger! you HAVE to update. :D
HAVE to. please? haha.
How are you doing? :D
No kidding, you simply amaze me your story is so, so good. I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for making it possible for me to read it. I enjoy reading it so much. Although your musings make me get disgusted by Keenan's attitude, I am loving reading it.
Maybe it's because I like Sarai so much, maybe because you write so well, or maybe, just maybe this Niall breaks my heart with his goodness.
So, anyway.
Here I am to comment your two newest updates I could not comment yesterday and the day before[?].
Summer's End.
Isn't it just cute how much they enjoy each other's company?...
Isn't it bittersweet how it's obvious that Niall is falling for her, but still remembering Leslie; almost even longing for her?...
Aweh, it's heartbreaking. Seriously it is you remember my first comment? When I had said, you should make it more gut-wrenching or something like that?.. Ha, it ten times better in how many days?.. Three days, perhaps? But this time it is the actual first time I felt my heart beat too fast, I felt it cringe, I had to hold on to my bed. [I'm sitting on it
It were probably only two words, that broke my heart. Ouch.
Anyway. Woah, congrats on that.
What I found really was reading about Sarai, how she made that bracelet, how happy she was. Niall is doing so good to her. Amazing.
It is amazing.
And, what also was really adorable/cute/sweet/lovable blah blah blah WAS THE KISS.
That kiss; what female being wouldn't want to be kissed like that?
And, well, the way you finish your chapters. With those little sentences make me melt each time.
I feel so joyful to read them, even if they are sad. They are so well-written... I love you Rini. D
I am your greatest fan.
The Black Rose Of War.
I refuse to comment. No, okay I don't.
YOU BROKE MY HEART. This time it hurt too badly. Woah, I sound ridiculous, don't I? I won't stop it now, though.
Do you know what you did to me? I feel so sorry for Sarai now, even if she doesn't seem to be in too much pain now.
Wow. Niall was beautifully disastrous to her. Yes, he was.
And, my Lord, a war?
You read Fragile Eternity, didn't you?
I am worried.
Off, this chapter: I would like to read the sequel, but I think I won't. Because I didn't read Fragile Eternity and I can't. I live in Germany and can't order it from here. Not from Canada, the US, Australia or the UK. I'm heart-broken about that.
And not being able to read your sequel sucks for me.
When you do a "threequel", no if you do one, could you, kind of, describe how Keenan got Sarai back then? What she fell, how she reacted?
Aww, I like how you pictured Sarai.
I did do it like that, too, but I imagined her having gold-brownish long wavy hair.
Anyhow, though; I liked this chapter a lot.
It was cute how you described that she wouldn't let go off her/his coat. Gah, just thinking of Niall makes my heart sink. He is so fine. anyhow. NIALL x3 x3 x3
NIALL. x3
He is so sweet to her, she seriously needs to go there more often to meet him. And, um, will Gabriel actually play a role in this fan fiction? It may be that Gabe, kind of, punished that Hound for doing that to her. Maybe, Niall could've ordered such thing. ;D
Woaho. Miana is excited, Sarai is getting slightly loose off of her addiction, doesn't she?
Um, well. If I were her I would not let go of that jacket either. He was so nice to her. Although he didn't have to, although it wasn't his thing to do. Sarai needs to see him as soon as possible. Blaeh, or maybe Niall should contact Ash or Keenan?...
Speaking of Keenan; dear, he was a nice boy. WOOH!
Thank you, I was afraid I might dislike him too much after this story.
And, uh, Sarai shalt not:DD] feel filthy. Nothing was her fault.
And, btw, yes I would like to read an explanation of Sarai looks.
So I can picture her with Niall. :D
You amazing little girl
I loved this chapter... does that sound sadistic? Because I don't mean to.
What I mean is that this chapter was really well-written. All of the emotions were brought to bear.
All the happiness at first, then the fear, yet admiration, [I don't know if you intended that, but still] and the pure pain.
Sarai always leaves me desperate. It must be so horrible to be so dependent to someone, to be so obliged to someone, you actually don't want to.
That someone is annoying the s''t out of me. Seriously. Sometimes I want Keenan to suffer so bad.
But yet again, I love him. D
ANYway.
The last part made me so sad"How was I going to explain to KEENAN...
Just imagine he would not even care. I mean, it's clear he would, someone actually hurt his oh-so dear fey, but I don't expect to be so hurt by it, as before...
I seriously cannot wait for Niall to play a bigger part from now on. Because he actually IS so amazing. And god, must he be sexy. Sorry. :P
Well, I wonder what's gonna happen later.. And I also wonder if Niall's gonna tell that his "brother" Seth. Because if he would, Seth would comfort her, too. He would be there for her, I think.
I want Sarai to get loose of her addiction to Keenan, break out of that summer court. It only hurts her.. well, it seems like it at least.
Ha, Rini.
I love your musings so much. And can't wait for the other one, and Thank you so very much for this long chapter, I was so happy on seeing this. :D
No, I did/do understand why she loves Keenan. I've studied Wicked Lovely religiously. :D
It just makes me don't want her to do so, because she is so sad...
My "WHY?" was probs an rhetorical question. :D
Hope that explained.
Anyway, your writing style gets better by the day. Wow.
I'm adding you to my favorite authors now.
So, yeah.
Keenan is being such a freaking a**hole it's driving me mad.
But then again what is he ought to do?
It must be hard if your fate-chosen soulmate doesn't love you back Seth. He is, well... awesome.
Confuzzled, I guess. Scared.. god, he just doesn't trust faerie, neither would I, if I'd be in his situation.
Anyway, I'm glad he actually talked to her.
And the effing ending made me sob in pain."I would go home... to loneliness.
So sad.
Uah, I love your story Rini.
Rini.
You make me hate Keenan, but I actually do love him. :D
I suppose you like Seth better?
Well, I love love love Sarai. But then again, I freak out at her.
WHY DOES SHE WANT HIM [Keenan, in this case] SO MUCH!
Ahh, Seth. Seth. Seth.
He has to talk to her. Like really talk and comfort her. If he won't, I'll do. Like.. um, how to? Ehh... I'll talk to her through telepathies, I guess? xD
Awe, Tiyana is so sweet to Sarai, and I feel so sorry for her.
She needs to be happy, needs love, her spot back?
SHE NEEDS A GUY.
If Keenan doesn't take care of her, maybe Seth could? ;DD *hint* xD
Umm, if I'd be Sarai I would be so freaking pissed, I would have already told him that I'm leaving his court and would have taken the risk of getting killed by.. him?..
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