I like also wonder what everbodys reactions will be when/if they find out what exactly Edward did 2 Bella

good start

written well this here chapter is

so very neat also written well

Nice

So, it's been an entire year. Why no update?

This is a really good story and one day I hope you get around to updating.

please update soon!

Please continue it!

great story..I love the writing style you used in this one...those short sentence somehow make the emotions much more tangible

l0ve l0ve luffin it D

i don't really like it but it can pass will bella ever come over her fear for edward and will she love him or hate him?

awesome story!please continue!

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What is up "Biffle"?

K, so you may have gotten some nice reviews for this story so far... BUT thats b-cuz i havent critisized it yet. *Grins Evilly"

True, i haven't read the story yet... i dont think so anyway..

BUT

Theres a few things i dont enjoy right already.

1) The Summary:

"The first night Edward watched her in her sleep, was just a cover story,..."

EW as if people did already have enough of a reason to think Eddie was some sick twisted Perv/Pedo BUT NOW u've gone and added more evidence... shame on you... & on Eddie for being so..Twisted.

2) Ch. Titles:

WTF is with the Roman Numerals ?

'Nuff said.

3) Updates:

Your Updating Is SHIT... In case you didn't catch that... S-H-I-T.

Good thing this is the 1st on ur list..

Stop messing around with the damn "Magic Triangle" and Write god damnit.

...This review was purely for shits&giggles.. so dont be offended.

See what happens when I dont go to school?

Parting Comment:

love your writing; you bitch your bedda than me /3

:D

beyond spectacular PUH-LEASE update soon