Excellent story. An interesting perspective for Ayeka, whose always kind of shown as being a little to proud and stubborn. This makes her seem far more human. I wish they would have shown her vulnerability more on the show.

This was a really sweet fic. Ayeka is my favorite character. Keep writing your good at it.

I truly like this poem/fic.

It sounds like a poem almost at the beginning but it is still good whether it was poem or not besides I like poems. If you went to my page you'd see a lot of poems that I wrote well any way keep writing.

From:S.A.N.

crie well i really woild be crying if i weren't trying to hold it in I really like it, it is short but I LIKED IT I PROBABLY READ IT MORE THAN 30 TIMES, BUT REALLY I LIKED IT. It's just Ayeka is my favorite character and every time i try to sleep my brain keeps poping up images making me dream anime and then now that I find out how to write fanfics I write some of em out, Anyway I REALLY LIKE IT. JA!

Yeah, Ayeka rules. Cute fic)

...I have always been told that i am much like Ayeka, and I have thought that I wasn't due to certian qualities Ayeka *has* that I didn't. After reading your fic, however, I have learned that Ayeka and I are basically identical in thought...To identical. I have long pondered the questions that Ayeka asked, so much that it's scary...

Thanks.