Hey, I was looking through the Pokemon stories yesterday and happened to stumble across yours. I just finished it this morning. I think it is awesome and that you should update it again cause I want to know what happens.

Just a tip though, you mentioned back in chapter 44/45 that Daisy died when she was alive during the party. Can you clear this up? Thanks!

When are you going to update chapter 48 because i been dying to know what going to happen right now.

awsome story i love where it's going so please update soon!

Love, love, LOVE this awesome epic pokemon story. It took me a while to finish reading it all, but I'm still not done, am I? Lmao. Anyways, can't wait to read more. I'll be waiting.

Daisy was alive earlier in the story when they were having the party after the indigo conference!

Aww, Jimmy is cute. I wish he had stayed with Bella! And Gary AND Jimmy were Jealous because they BOTH like Bella!

This one was actually really funny!

I don't know if the offer for an OC is still open, but if it is, I'd like to ask to have my character, Amelia introduced. If you say yes, just let me know.

I love Growlithe! XD He's one of my favorite fire-type Pokemon! ^^ I'm more of a fire- and dragon-type trainer.

Love the story so far! ^^ Hope to see more of Gary though. ^_^

Awws, Gary got jealous! XD

I hope he appears more often than he does in the games (I'm assuming that's what you're going by, by what I've read so far.) I wonder if they'll continue their jouney together at some point in the story? That'll be good. ^^

That was great! ^^

Onix scares me...>.>;; No matter if it's in the anime or games...actually, it scares me the most in Pokemon Stadium, Stadium 2, Colosseum, and XD: Gale of Darkess...^_^; The parts that usually scare me are when the camera is on the ground in front of Onix and it looks up at him...::shudders:: Those...beady...EYES...>_<;

And the battle with Brock seemed VERY smiliar to the one that Ash had with him. It's good that you made some differences though. ^^

I wonder what Brock's gonna be thinking when Ash uses the same tick with HIS Pikachu! XD

I'm already in love with this story! XD

Charmander is also my favorite Kanto starter. ^^ As soon as she met Charmander, something came over me and I immediately thought "I wanna read more!"

And then the meeting with Gary...I want to see more of their rivalry and if they ever get any closer! I just had this urge to keep reading! ^^ I hope I can finish reading the next chapter before my mom makes me go to bed. XD It's getting pretty late here. ^^;;

With Pokemon, I don't usually like to read adventure fics that start at the very beginning of the anime, but this one is just fantastic! You're a very talented writer and I'd love to see this fic completed! When it's completed, I'll feature it in my deviantArt journal so the people that visit my page will click on the link (if they're interested) and read it! ^_^ I'm not kidding when I say that I LOVE this story!

I usually try to review every chapter, but since this fic's so long, I'll only review every other chapter. ^^;

Well, jaa ne~! ^.^

~Mahou Senshi Koinu-Chan aka SailorRocket (on deviantArt)

good fight scenes, but I hope your fights aren't all, "all but one pokemon faints, or win every battle", and you use statistics and stuff to determine what happens.

Good story, but don't leave out as much, like Bella's conversation with her Nidoran. Keep up the good work!

Good story so far, very well written, good fight scene so far!