Like i said before, i'm addicted. I hope you update with new chapters soon. I would hate for this to be yet another unfinished DBZ story like so many others on here.

I found nothing really wrong with this one. maybe comma use and the occasional spelling error but your story is good and just catches my ADD off guard and forces me to keep reading. I tried to stop reading after chapter 3 pain, but I couldn't stop myself. I almost hurt my bladder because i really needed to go to the bathroom too.

I'm getting addicted! you have some errors, and you could use more commas. I notice an error, you forgot to write sword where trunks straps it on.

hey there, just wanted to say great story! please update soon!

This is cute cant wait for more

i reall y like this story cant wait for you to make another chapter

I really like your story. This chapter was great, please update soon,I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Awe, Veggie-chan's worried, how sweet ^^. Well, i see that the suspense is finally starting to come in smaller doses. At least Trunks is sweet again, though i don't blame him for being a defensive asshole earlier. Good luck with the next chapter; eagerly awaiting it! ^^

Wow...This had to be the absolute best story I have read so far. It is just so...I'm not even sure what the right word is, but I love it.

Finally, I was wondering if Trunks would always be a bastard, but you managed to make me happy again ^^. I loved the skips between the two different situations, it made it easier to understand. Thanks for the update, good luck on the next one ;D

~MK

I love your story!! I like the fact that you are getting Mirai Trunks and Pan togehter! So up date-up date your story soon!

Why...why must you hold us at this suspense?!! WHY!

Anywho, it was a lovely update even though Trunks is so paranoid he'd be affraid of a toaster O_o. Really, Mirai Trunks is an asshole, Pan should have slapped him! I really wish you luck with the update!

~MK

that's a good story are you gonna make more chapters if you will than i'll read em

very good story i love it can u make more chapters 5/5

Wow! i love the update ^^ I can't wait to see s'more soon. I can't help but wonder what is happening to Pan though, wish you luck with the next chapter ^^

~MK

In all honesty, i think you started the first chapter of this story so well that i groaned when i seen that there wasn't a next chapter. That's the fourth good story this week! Oh well, i'm no better ^^

I especially love the relationship you developed between Pan and Vegeta. It was particularly wonderful the emotions you expressed with Pan becoming closer to the Briefs. I can just imagine Goku coming back and finding all this out XD

Anywho, i think you are off to a fantastic start and i wish you luck on the second chapter ^^