Oh can't wait to see what happens next

Oh interesting I'll wait for more :D

Oh interesting :D

nine tailed fox is this naruto?

I was wondering why no one noticed how unique they were. Now I know :D Great chapter

Awsome chapter. I guess you like to torure Renton. But I can't blame you he's fun to mess with.

LOL at Renton fainting... this is a good start.

But try to get rid of those underlines (leave them on you're notes). Also you're opening and ending notes need to be seperated from the story. For the opening note after it press enter and type chapter 1 or so on. For the closing hit enter and type chapter end.

Fantastic job i love eureka 7 too if you ever want to do a collab story let me know i love writing fan fiction