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Temari 88
2009-10-26 . chapter 12
Hahaha!! Well, I don't know about crazy... but masochist for sure! LOL Still it's very cute and I think I wouldn't mind it either if that's the greeting and the treatment I get! ^^

Keep up the good work!
Chaos In a Perfect Circle
2009-09-02 . chapter 11
Well. I've read it all. And I've had a few tries at writing a review for it. Telling you how you have a gift and the emotions you portray in your characters have a a profound impact on my thoughts...

But I couldn't quite find the words to describe it suitably.

So I'll just say thankyou and ask you to please write more, I enjoy it so very much.
Chaos In a Perfect Circle
2009-09-02 . chapter 2
Dam. It seems the quality of work I find on this site only keeps improving xD I wonder if I'll ever write this well ^^
Temari 88
2009-08-25 . chapter 11
Emotional, you say... well I guess you're right ^^ but it's a good kind of emotional! I thought it was endearing to imagine Gaara sacrificing his own blood to show Naruto that he wanted to be his friend: he'd be ready to give his own life :D

The end just put a happy smile on my lips, cuase I instantly thought about the hand shake in the Shippuden (as was probably your intention)! XD

Keep up the good work!
xXKimochiWatariXx
2009-08-15 . chapter 10
So cute! At first I thought that it was gaara's POV, but then you mentioned "black kohl" and I was like, "Oh! It's Naruto's POV." XD haha.

It's still good, either way.

Great job. Can't wait for the next one.

~KW
Temari 88
2009-08-15 . chapter 10
Oh I love Slumdog Millionare: it's a wonderful movie, as soon as I saw it, it became one of my favourites of all times! And that song really gives you a lot of energy :D

Really sweet chapter! XD
xXKimochiWatariXx
2009-07-12 . chapter 9
Yeah! ** all the rest! ...

...O_O...sorry.

I really liked this! And I guess it's safe to say that this one is probably my favorite out of all the drabbles you have in here. They're all good though, this one just stood out.

Great job! :)

Yay! Gaara had learned to love! You know, I always wondered if that's why he has the 'ai' tattoo on his forehead. Love seems to be the thing he's missing out on ever since he was little, and it's also something that he had yet to learn.

hm...

:D

Please update soon!

~KW
Temari 88
2009-07-08 . chapter 9
Aww(x20)! ^-^ So sweet! And, well, that little little curse just puts emphasis(I'm not sure if it's written right...) on what Gaara's feeling so it more than fits! XD He (and Naruto) has all the right in the world to not care about anyone besides each other, after everything they've gone through...

Great work, Temari 88!! *kiss*
Temari 88
2009-06-27 . chapter 8
Very sad, this chapter ç.ç It's not so easy to decide who's the protagonist here, because it could really be both...

Yet I interpret it as a Naruto's POV for mainly two reasons: 1) the deep suffering, not because Gaara wouldn't be suffering like this but because I think Gara wouldn't let it show so much 2) the will to fight because it is something the sticks with Naruto :D

Still, it could really be both.

Great work,
Temari 88 XD
Pure White Lilly
2009-06-26 . chapter 6
"It's all as simple as planned, the reactions (mine and yours) quickly succeed with harmony in mind, perfection, stability in this world so hostile."

LOVED that line so much! The way you write is truly amazing and I love all the extended metaphors you use in these drabbles. It's not very often I stumble across something so thought provoking yet at the same time doesn't make my brain hurt.

I loved the lobster chapter too, as it reminds me of how I looked only a few weeks ago and it made me laugh trying to imagine a sunburnt Gaara, all I could think was... KAWAI!

Anyway congrats on your beautiful work and I can't wait for the next update. :P
Temari 88
2009-06-25 . chapter 7
LOL As I always thought, Sasuke is a bastard! And Naruto never stops to amaze me in his ability to follow wrong advices... XD
Temari 88
2009-06-08 . chapter 6
Aw...! ^-^ This was heartbreakingly sweet! You know, now I'd like to see that picture... :P

Favourite sentence: "pain had marked me with madness while it tore an eternal smile on your lips" a beautiful way of wording Naruto's always smiling face, even in a bad situation!

Keep up the great work!
Temari 88 XD
xXKimochiWatariXx
2009-06-08 . chapter 6
i loved it...as usual. :D Please update soon! This one was exceptionally good. :)

~KW
xXKimochiWatariXx
2009-05-09 . chapter 5
Home=Naruto! I know, I know...that was totally redundant...XD

"Those scratches upon the walls, you say? I never knew exactly what those were, but they don't look bad at all." haha! I loved that line...and the last line of the story. ;)

You know, I think those scratch marks of Naruto's are the whiskers of the nine-tailed fox. Somehow, I always think that when the Hokage sealed the fox in Naruto, the tattoo and the scratch marks appear as symbols. :) That's just my theory.

Can't wait for the next one.

~KW
Temari 88
2009-05-09 . chapter 5
Gaara... don't worry, I'll leave you alone immediately (not before placing two or three -hundred- cameras in strategic parts of the 'house' LOL)

Alright... 'Aww' aside -because it seems I can't help doing it when reading things like these... this was beautiful, and I totally understand where you're coming from: I believe they're a very poetic couple as well ^^

Good work!
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