Just to say, I really adored this.

You perfectly captured Jizabels and Cassians so-called "heart-ache", and it pulled my own heartstrings.

Well done:)

... Please tell me that you'll be writing a sequel for this? Even if it totally deviates from what's happening in the manga, it's too enthralling not to be continued!! I love Cassian and Jizabel, and it made me really sad when Cassian was put into Cassandra's body. Granted, in custody of his own body, Cassandra made it look not so appealing, but Cassian pulls it off quite well. And this pairing is really cute too. I really enjoyed reading it, and I sincerely hope that you decide to write a sequel where Jizabel gets to be happy and Cassian gets his boy. :D

Eh, the only thing I can say improvement wise, is just double check every paragraph after you write them, because little mistakes slip through and it's really annoying when that happens (probably moreso for the author than the reader). I know that I hate it when that happens and sometimes i can't even pick the errors out half the time because I can be so damn unobservant. Anyways, enough out of me. I loved it, and you should write a sequel ;)! Geh, and please excuse any mistakes in my critique, I'm half dead from a grad party my friend threw last night and I only got about two hours of sleep, so yeah...

It's always CassianxJizabel with you, isn't it?... Oh, well. Each to his own, I suppose. I like the fact that you don't write Jizabel like he's an emotionless bastard, though. XD It's a breath of fresh air from the way Kaori Yuki portrays him a lot of the time. ^^

Ok...I think I started crying when I read this T^T

Simply amazing, as usual X3

Best version of the train station scene EVAR.

O_O

I would review more in depth but... I've been unable to write reviews lately, my mind just hasn't been functioning that way... Arsonist made me happy. xD

Oh, and the last bit had me choked with emotion. Poor Cassian. D;
The two of them are both really hurting but... poor Cassian...