...Wow. you are amazing XD

oh my! teehee :3

This is awesome!!XDD I love this! Roxas is just too adorable and cute and and ROXAS!! MAN! I hope you update soon!! This is just wow!!

Damn... Marly really knows how to pick 'em cuz Axel is definitely falling hard on his ass over this one :'D
My mind is still spinning from the insane switch over from cute and mushy to just plain crackish. Then again, I should know better seeing as your fics can be pretty crackish XD [I'm refering to the "I can feel it" part]
LOL! SEX ED FOR ROXY! *cackles*
The huge gaps in Roxas' knowledge is hilarious. This kid is so naughty and yet naive... that's not the right word. kinda. not really. you know what I mean. I hope. OTL
OMFG. HE'S. TOO. CUTE. SO EAGER TO PLEASE.
It's a shame that he's not into the idea of love though. lol. Kinda like a little kid. cute. hahaha.
How very pedo-ish of me. Ew.

Axel, Axel, Axel... don't you know that pants worn by gay men in these sorts of situations are all tight, cr0tchless, and or @ssless?

huh... not revealing. not sure if it's a do not want or a want. lol oh well Rox is cute in anything x'D

lol that was a cute close to this chapter :'D

I really hope Saix doesn't decide to stalk Axel home and use Roxas as an excuse to get him fired or some equally ridiculous sh!t... well... it'd be okay, as long as it was interesting of course lololol

NU! DON'T THROW HIM AWAY, AXEL!!
"He was a business man after all. These things were important to him..." OH LAWD. REALLY AXEL?! THAT'S YOUR EXCUSE?! *cackles*


OH JEEZ. ASSEMBLY?! ...that's an epic cockblock for those who just want to get right to it lolol

lololol bunny suit. I like that it isn't just the normal bunnysuit that you see girls wearing though. I kinda wish I could see it hahaha. Maybe someone will do fanart!
lol... he's gonna wake up with Rox in bed with him, isn't he xD

hahaha. bunny boy.

D'AW!! AXEL! HOW COULD YOU DENY SUCH A CUTIE?! YOU HURT HIS FEELINGS, YOU BASTARD!

I like this. A LOT. So bittersweet...
MUST. READ. MOAR.
I really really really hope you continue on with this!


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Hm... Your writing style. It is /AMAZING/. I love how your writing is just so realistic- well, excluding the "whole please-fuck-me-so-that-I-can-live thing" as Axel had so eloquently stated. Ahaha, it's just /brilliant/!

As for your outfit requests, I'll have to say I have a few. Definitely, as has been stated by an earlier reviewer, "Give him leather!" That would be /amazing/. Along with, I don't know; maybe a hooker outfit- or two. The always lovely Salem makes wonderful inspiration, you know. -nods vigorously-

I have NO criticism, whatsoever; so just keep writing please~♥

LOL i like i like. it's so funny XD and adorable. can't wait for your next chapter! update again soon!!

Ah! The end made me giggle so much,
Roxas is such a doll, pun intended!
Hehe, i love this,
cant wait for chapter 3~

"And you have a cock! I can /feel/ it."

"And don't you know what cowboys are good at?"

I swear, you're going to kill me. XD Best. Lines. Ever. I swear I had this story on story alert... well, I do now if I didn't! :D

... Oh Roxas. :'D

Aww, it's so cute how clueless Roxas is xD I especially loved the part where he asked if he got the glass of water correctly! How adorable xD

Yup, Axel needs to get Roxas some normal clothes.

Well, you can't blame Roxas for wanting to talk about sex. I mean, he probably really wants to become fully human and if sleeping with his 'master' will let him become fully human, he would really want to do it. 'sides, Roxas seems really devoted to Axel anyways =D
But wow, one week to fall in love. Good luck Roxas! I'm curious as to how this story is going to be like. Like, is it going to be just the span of 1 week? But considering we're already on Night 2, that would mean there will be only 5 chapters left...
Oh well, can't wait to see what you come up with! Keep up the awesome work!
I love your writing style and the humour you add in your stories xD

Chapter Two, oh how I have longed for you.

"…which is why he ducked his head and tried to walk past the secretary’s desk as quickly as possible." - Larxene? As a secretary? That is one image I'm not likely to forget anytime soon. Brilliant.

"After swallowing nervously, he typed in his search once more.

“Axel, what are you doing?”" - I had to snort. Wonderful timing here, with the insertion of the dialogue (timing may not be the appropriate word, but hopefully you'll understand what I'm trying to say.).

"or trying to organize scavenger hunts while the boss was out to lunch…" - Oh, I love how playful this Axel is.

"Instantly several pop-up windows of porn appeared on his screen. Axel jumped, trying clicking out of them but they only popped up again and then multiplied." - Anyone who owns a computer and says that (s)he never experienced this is a liar. (Probably.)

"Perhaps a spatula to pry the boy off of his body." - :-D

"“I’ve been living by myself for years now; I’m used to taking care of myself, really." A capable Axel is kind of ridiculously hot.

“But that was a while ago,” he quickly amended, not wanting to upset Roxas anymore. “And we’re no longer in love.” - Curious. Will I ever find out who? (You, obviously, can ignore that question.)

And the ending. Cowboy!Akuroku will never not be good. :-)

Aww, goddamnit, Axel's a prude! WHY AXEL WHY!? WHAT'S WITH THE MORALS!? Just fuck him, lol. XD

Man, Roxas is SCREWED. (Not in the good way.) If he's got a WEEK, how's Axel gonna fall in love with him that quick? *sigh* And why must Axel have such inhibitions about a DOLL? Hmm, maybe he can make an exception? Just to SAVE A LIFE, COME ON! I mean, srsly, between his own personal values and what could effectively be considered DEATH for Roxas, can he really be so selfish? *tsking*

Just one way of looking at it. ;D All in hopes that such points of view will get them into the sack. ;3 Kekekeke. *love*

UNF I WANT ROXAS TO TOTALLY SEDUCE AXEL SUCCESSFULLY. I mean srsly. Love is nice, but A WEEK? You can't fall in love in a week. Well, not really. Maybe in fanfic you can. IDK. I LOOK FORWARD TO WHAT YOU ARE PLANNING! 8D

I was gonna also say DAMN Axel's got stamina for having been without for so long...but then I remembered that he's also evidently been straight all this time. Gr, complications. Srsly dude, WHAT are you planning?? *fascinated stare* Because if you give yourself a WEEK, and with a STRAIGHT (so far) guy who won't do it without being in LOVE, I mean, you're pulling in issues of sexuality as WELL as trying to fall in love, and in a NARROW time frame. SO THAT'S WHY I'M SO CURIOUS AS TO WHAT YOU GOT PLANNED. 8D

Um, and I'm being all nosy and stuff. And also prolly taking things too seriously, LMAO. SORRY DEAR! I should be more normal.

Like, UM. ROXAS. OUTFITS. MAID!? And COWBOY UNF UNF LOL YUM. And as;ldkfaj;slkgjaklfg SEXY SEX TOY ROXAS IS SEXALICIOUS! GUUHH I WANNA SEE HIM IN BEEDD WITH AXEL. He'd be so deliciously aggressive, RAWR. *daydreams*

Ack. OK. I srsly gotta stop perving on your fic. XD UM IT'S HOW I SHOW MY LOVE THO! *perv perv drool drool lick GLOMP* TEL ME THERE WILL BE SEX! PLZ!? 8D 8D

8D This story is really good. I love your writing style. I cant wait for the next chapters c:

lovely. Update soon.

lol Roxas xD
an update, :D happiness.
good explanation of love *nod nod* but OH will Roxas learn what it means to love? must stick around and find out ^.^
thanks :)