I really loved that did one on Max and Ben and really went in depth into her feelings and emotions that connect them. Fabulous job, even though you made me cry or maybe because of it. ;)

Completely heartbreaking but beautifully written, so even though you're breaking my heart I just can't stop reading them. Keep up the good work I can't wait to read the next chapter.

~Punkie

Wow. Talk about traumatizing events. Amazing. Update soon.

~Chica~

Those two are crazy! That's not how you deal with emotions. And yet they don't know how to let each other in. They're so stubborn. This was really good.

~Chica~

really nice!! that would be a wonderful beginning for a GREAT story ;)

great!

That was so incredibly sad! It was very emotional but realistic. I was surprised to see Ben instead of Alec though but it still was good. I think it adds some to Max's history and her future interactions with Alec. ;) Though it was sad I really liked it. Can't wait to see more.

Gosh you're amazing.
I wish Brick would contninue...I see why you didn't wanna do it...with the brickwall, but it was still good. very good. and angsty.
And cold was simply sad.
Your writing skills are really good, still.
The stories are touching ang strike a core somewhere deep.
Its hard to explain.
so..whatever.
Keep doing what u are because it is what u#re good at.
Really good.

Beautiful, its so intense. Every chapter is well worth the read. "He had saved her with these hands. She had killed him with her own. She had promised him he would never lose her. But along the way, she had lost him instead." I loved that part, there's so much sadness.

C is COOLZ!

vivid and scary description of the chase and falling through the ice. i like the detail of ben's wounded hands from punching his way to her. i can't remember whether the show ever told us how she got out so i think i'll keep this version. heartbreaking look at ben's death.

Wow, that was intense! Good job. I really thought the end stood out as the best part. It never ends well for that boy, does it?

i love the premise that alec and max have been messing up on jobs when they're together. i can just see how all the head slapping and posturing would get in the way. the tone of the intervention works too, the changes in POV are like peeks behind different brick walls. the characterizations that are revealed are genuine and messy and complicated, just like i like them. oh, alec!

I liked this one! Will you be continuing this with another letter? :D

How wonderful to see a new story from you. This one is heartbreaking. Excellent use of psy-ops personnel, and Alec's reaction to her was both believable and chilling.

Great Izzy! I loved it and I'm glad you're writing again!