Snow day? I'm jealous. You get snow? Grr.

Methinks this is where the horror part begins to apply, yes?

Ooh, intrigue. I like intrigue. Hiro's been recommending sex slaves?

Now I want more, dammit! More so than before anyway. Keep up the good work ^^

MANIAC CACKLING. HAHA. HA. HA.

This was fulfilling. See, in all honestly - and not to be an ass - some of the chapters in this story are just fillers. Of course, to mock you would be to mock myself, for as far as fillers are concerned, we are two peas in a very shanty pod. BUT FEAR NOT because this chapter totally kept the plot pulling forward. And that makes me very happy. ;3

Mariah is clueless and... oh, what's the word... Naive. As I expect her to be in contrast to Bryan's angry, scruffy all-knowing-ness.

But OH I love Vlad even more. His lack-of-English made it awesome. And poor Mathilda! Crap, what the hell was he doing to her?! x-x MY MIND.

I eagerly wait for you to break your no-writing promise and update again! I'll aim to update Captive for you, as means of a reward. BLOD. (lol Kevin can't take a punch)

-xC

I want snow! *pouts* Well, maybe not. That would make taking the puppy out a real chore, much more so than it already is. Still, any day off from school is reason to be excited.

I don't know if it's my love of dance, but I love Mietta as a dancer. That sounds odd, but it just seems to fit her personality. On an even odder note, I think hula would be fun, but I'd collapse into a giggling fit almost immediately. I wouldn't be able to take it seriously. XD

You write villains very well. Mr. Alexandrov and Mr. von Richtoffen are the perfect bad guys. They fit into two different categories of evil. Alexandrov is in the more violent, uncontrolled temper, easy to flare up, and downright intimidating category. Mr. von Richtoffen is in the eerily calm, scarily pleasant category. I tend to find the latter scarier, because they seem so much like a normal person. In fact, for all intents and perposes, they could be normal, but they're not. It's cringe/shiver worthy. I adore it.

And I adore this.

I wonder what will become of Kevin's exploration. He's certainly going to be beaten up in the near future. Now that he knows where Mathilda is, I wonder if those two will become closer friends, or if they'll ever see each other again after this episode.

In any case, I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter. :)

Lucky you...you get a snow day while we get rain, rain, rain.

I really really liked this one. :D It had everything I enjoy about stories: Oliver, funniness, exploring when one is supposed to be asleep, people getting beat, all that fun stuff. XD

I was also fond of your bad pun. You know how I enjoy puns. XD

Ian's door is the best color alive. I felt that needed mentioning.

Overall, this was just a great chapter. Everything was awesome, the conversations, the exploring, the pun...which wasn't exactly part of the story, but you get the idea. XD

Keep writing! Y'know, next time you have a snow day at an insane time when snow shouldn't even exist yet.

AAGH RUSSIAN MAFIA.

Or maybe just a really rich guy with a knack for hiering cliche henchman. But either way, I love the guy. (The henchman. Like, really, for some reason after I read this I wanted to high-five him.)

I love this Nikolai guy so far. Sadistic, happy bad guys are my favorite; if you haven't noticed. Which you probably haven't, but whatever. As for Von Richie-Imma-slave-trader, he's hard to read. He traffics minors - willingly - and yet he treats Kevin kinda like his own son... even with the possibility of him selling him to Nikolai. So I'm a bit confused on that point, but it might be intentional on your part.

And yes, Kevin-peril makes me happy. :3 So happy. I look forward to where this is going. But I demand blood. DEMAND IT. Soon, at least. I shall return the favour, yes?

- xC

I read this last night and saved in my inbox to review. Because I'm lazy.

I love how Nikolai has a thug that follows him around. Such a dense thug he is, too. It's funny because it lives up to the attitude all the evil Russian guys in the Beyblade world have. You know, that I'm-surrounded-by-incompetence one we all know and love. And that's how Nikolai treats his hulking thug of a bodyguard. Ha. Where'd he find that guy anyway? An alleyway? He seems more like a gang leader than a rich guy's bodyguard. XD

I laughed at the thought of Bryan cooking. XD And the fact that he hasn't eaten much of anything decent ever. Whoever does the cooking in the Blitzkrieg household apparently isn't very good. I liked how Mariah compared cooking to chemistry for Bryan's man brain to be able to comprehend what to do. Even better, compare it to deadly chemicals. She'll make a cook out of Bryan yet!

Also, the "hunting lodge that got hit by a growth ray" bit was a great way to describe the mansion. Congratulations! I tend to like to go all out with my building/room/place descriptions. They either turn out awesome, or sucky, due to my adjective-and-comparison lacking brain. :P

Brilliant, once again. :)

Now, if you'll excuse me, I'll be getting to some writing, hopefully. Your stuff always makes me feel like writing.

School definitely is evil, isn't it? More so when you have end of year exams upon which your entry into uni is dependant on...

Teehee, liked the bit with Mariah cooking. Was cute.

And the foreboding atmosphere of the last bit was just great. Looking forward to more - keep up the good work! :D

What?!?! You?! Not write anymore?!?! I think I shall faint... (<-Oh so obviously means that I disagree with your mom. Hugely disagree.)

Kevin + peril = happiness, you are correct! XD I loved this chapter, as you probably know...sorry for my uncreativity. You and my writing are the only things suffering from that, for which I apologize.

Well, 'twas another great chapter! I would say I can't wait to read more, but I can if I really have to. XD

Aww...Tala and Mariah just make me go aww. ;)

Go Lee's grandmother! She is awesome! :D

Ollie and Luisa are cute too. :)

And the Holocaust was horrible. D:

- is doing it now in English at school -

Anyway, great work, keep it up. =D

It's a good thing they're easy to write, otherwise, I'm sure updates wouldn't happen as often. XD

I enjoyed the talk about nowhere and somewhere for some reason. It makes sense. XD

Lee's grandmother is entertaining as well. XD

But I think my most favorite part was the little argument thing between Oliver and Luisa. :D

So, to sum it all up, that was a brilliant chapter!!

Keep writing!

This chapter was awesome as usual Macy. I've really got to do some updating...

Anyway, Luisa and Oliver are so cute together! I love their little bicker-fest!

I wonder what they'll do about Lee... His spunky grandmother is a nice touch by the way; kind of reminds me of mine in some ways.

Mariah's nowhere and somewhere bit captivated me. I was all, "It really is true!" I get too caught up in little philosophical things. XD

Great chapter, once again. Update as soon as time permits and I'll get to work!

Fofofo. Sorry. I didn't review this sooner, but my day has been step by step insanity and half way through reading this, I got pulled from the computer.

Yay, depth to Mariah's character! They way you portray her reminds me directly of one of my good old friends. Always thinking about strange things in way to much depth. :/ But it's a good thing, because I love her for it. And Tala. xD "Hocrap a girl" was the initial behavior that I spotted, but maybe I just really wanted to see that, and maybe it isn't actually there. He seemed a bit more calm after a few seconds.

Also, Vonny (may I call him that?) Is getting cooler. Like, if I knew him as a teacher instead of a human trafficker, I probably would have really liked him. But that's just me. I feel doom looming in Kevin's future, too. If there's no doom, I'm going to be sad. ;-;

Sorry I can't muster more of a review. There's a lot to say, but I don't see much use in going over every thought then went through my head while I read this. o.o''

- Grace

Crazy people are oodles of fun to read about as well!! XD

That was an awesome chapter! I just love how you write Bryan...I don't believe I can mention that enough. XD

I also like the color of Ian's bedroom door. Green is the best color alive. XD

Lee's having a full blown mental breakdown...whatever will Rei do? XD In other words, I cannot wait to find out what will happen next.

Loved Bryan in this chapter!! And also this chapter itself. :D

Congrats on getting a life. XDXD I shall await updates! Although I won't be too sour if they're a little bit late. Or even if they're a lot bit late. As long as you don't stop for good I'll be fine. XD Sorry for this late review...I forgot to check my e-mail before we went camping.

Ah well, more time for me to spew nonsense later...now I have to go read the next chapter! You are becoming far too efficient. XDXD

Ian's green quote reminds me of Riley. XD

I quite enjoyed this chapter. Nothing much happens, but you still manage to make it interesting.

Every little detail you put in about the Blitzkrieg Boys lifestyle is so hilariously amusing that I'm hooked from the very start. Also, you make them wacky without making it seem unrealistic.

The bit with Lee was very interesting and Mariah actually isn't annoying me the way you write her. Usually I hate her. I'm not sure why, but she always got on my nerves. But when you write her, I love it. Fancy that.

Update as soon as time permits, and I'll try to as well!!