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Reviews for: Paradise
ireadtoomanybooks
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
Love it XD So cute! Gokudera is definitely innocent at heart XD
strawhat-alchemist
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
Lol prove his love with his dying will? That's something I'd like to see!
Hehe I give you 10,0/5
XXXMystery
2009-06-25 . chapter 1
Aww this is so sweet! Impulsive Gokudera is the cutest and the most innocent. This pairing is so great with each other and one of the most canon!
kazuya8
2009-05-17 . chapter 1
...Wow.

I really loved this. It was short and sweet and really well written. I rather wish that there had been quotation and apostrophe marks in this, though. Maybe it was the word program you were using. Anyway, great job on it! It was my first KHR fic, and I definitely like the way you write Gokudera/Tsuna.
Tsuki no Akebono
2009-05-15 . chapter 1
*squeel*cute!~!!
Azamiko
2009-04-29 . chapter 1
*blink* In the middle of class? How embarrassing...
TheaBlackthorn
2009-04-29 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this and the previous one - amusing yet oddly sincere :)
breadsticks
2009-04-29 . chapter 1
Wow, somehow it was at a bit more sedate pace from Tsuna's pov, but it fit him very well, what with being slightly shell-shocked by Gokudera's love for him. Still a bit hilarious, but moreso at the end with Reborn and the Dying Will scene. I loved Gokudera and Tsuna and the simple things in their relationship, here.

With that said, you had a bit of grammar and spelling errors. Just a little bit that bothered me. And I sort of wished you kept Reborn out of it and that Tsuna had proclaimed the "With my Dying Will, I will prove my love for you," as his own proclamation in response to Gokudera's. So that it would have been by his choice and not some bullet's. But I guess Tsuna needed a push, as always. Thanks for writing!
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