i think it's pretty sweet.

ah, mamoru, nice job jinxing it there, "I'll have all the time in the world to show her how i really feel" what do you THINK is going to happen after that? ah, mamoru-baka
i still love the idea, and can't wait for an expansion of this jake character. and this son he has...hm, seiya? i don't think it'd be mamoru. uhm, i can't think of anyone else. ooh, maybe a new character? well, i look forward to finding out! great job! :D

oh heylo! i was just passing by and i saw your new story! what luck! :)
sounds like an interesting idea! i go to read the next chapter!

awesome story!

great story so far please update soon!!

very well written, update soon!

all poor mamoru was wrong he won't have all the time to admit his feelings since she got to move!! Good story so far

keep going

why i am always saying poor serena in you storys?

and this is story 2 for you


anyways, me liked it.


ps. will darien find a way to Go with serena
with out her knowing?

chapter 3 please? ^_^