 Cat1991 2009-07-07 . chapter 1Well done ^^
I just think that it'd be better if Nami asked Luffy why he didn't loose faith in her while he was angry against Zorro in Whiskey Peak. It'd be interesting to see what the captain can answer, don't you think so ? |
 Lord of Murder 2009-05-19 . chapter 1I'm not a girl but is a squee still appropriate. Ah! Love this pairing! But poor nami wheres the reciprocation dammit! |
 Alastair 2009-04-30 . chapter 1What the hell does this have to do with Luffy being pure white? |
 Alea Seikou 2009-04-29 . chapter 1Interesting look at Luffy through Nami's POV. I like how you characterised the crew. They all seemed true to themselves. Especially so of Luffy who DOES trust his crew regardless of the fact that he's fought or been tricked by most of them at some point. |
 Monkey D. Conan 2009-04-29 . chapter 1 This was great. I hope you make more oneshots soon. update! |
 SpyralHax 2009-04-29 . chapter 1Easy to imagine Luffy as the object of a lot of onesided affection from the various female characters in the series, Nami near the top of that list. Has to be hard for the poor girl. Nice, sweet little story. |