Addictive and twisted. Just the way Kira's love should be.

There were some things I didn't like- the characterization of L and his apparent hidden cruelty. But I suppose every author has his style, and despite minor quirks I very much enjoyed this. Make sure to keep to the story though, and not pound the readers with too much profound imagery or overuse of metaphors. This can cause deep messages to lose their affect, and readers could get confused.

Other than that, the story is perfectly twisted with morbid love. The contradicting arguments really get a reader thinking, and how it all plays out left me with a strange feeling I cannot describe. Good work overall.

While I don't agree with a lot of your characterization- mostly of Light- I really enjoyed reading this, despite not even liking L and Light as a couple at all. I think that you captured Misa the best out of them, but I appreciated your interpretation of everyone, even when it didn't match up to my idea of canon. The bits with all three of them together were the best, to me.

Quite how stunning this is can't quite be expressed in words. Or maybe we could just sum it up with just a few: slick, insane and utterly brilliant. Your L and Light are what happens when you strip away the logic and calculation and the increments of humanity they both still possess and leave the bubbling, solipsistic insanity that is an intrinsic part of both of them. Your writing style is very, very good, metaphors are amazing and it's almost a tranistion. Light seems to utterly lose any semblance of sanity as the story goes on until the end when he's really freaking everybody out. Beautiful and meaningful and childish love it.

...wow. I'm not really sure how to respond to this fic!

First of all, you are a brilliant writer. You captured Light and L's sick, twisted, sugary sweet relationship so well Light's insanity drips off every paragraph.
Some of the characterization of L disturbed me. I do realize that L's meant to be unhinged, almost as unhinged as Light and this is a divergence fic, but it felt like he was too unhinged, too Light, at some points. Him putting his insane love over what he knew was right didn't feel in character at some points. Most of the time, however, he was very in-character and very ...very L.
Either way this was a very interesting, very intriguing read and I will definitely recommend it to others.

I really love how you wrote their insanity... I don't really like shipping these guys, but the way you wrote it... It was just so twisted and perfect.

Masterpiece, brilliantly done.
This and not some futile amateur attempt at sounding like a psychologically stilted genius is how Yagami Light and L should sound like. You've captured their makeshift folie à deux in its basest, most indelible form.
Pats on the back and lots of cookies, my friend, you've surely outdone yourself (and plenty others) for many days to come. Will look forward to more of your work in the future.

I'm going to be honest: you're an incredible writer, and this is a wonderfully-penned, excellently-written story however, I do feel that you made Light far too cruel to his parents. Obviously this is my personal opinion, and, after all, this is your story, but I do feel that it is impossible or nearly impossible for a person to truly feel nothing for their parents.
Perhaps I have a naive, idealistic view of the world, but I do believe all human beings have some measure of empathy. Your parents are the most important people in your life the early parts of it at least and if Light didn't care at all, he wouldn't have gone to the trouble of maintaining his 'perfect son' facade for so long. He wouldn't have minded hurting them.

Anyway. Apart from that, I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.

I loved it! The writing style is very different from what I usually read but it didn't take me long to learn how to follow the story. In fact the vaugeness of the story made it even better! It lent to the air of darkness and maddness :D And that darkness and maddness is exactly what made me love this story so much. No happily ever afters but plenty of psychopaths! 3

This story is gorgeous. I'm incredibly impressed. Excellent, excellent work.

I love this. You characterize Light and Kira wonderfully, believable and yet so sad especially with his dad. The thing with Misa and their little love triangle was beautiful. Your writing style is amazing too, like poetry almost. This fic deserves a lot more reviews than it currently has. Keep writing. 33

O.O Holy...sorry about now reviewing until the last chapter, but I couldn't stop reading long enough.

Wow...so deliciously twisted, and mad, and absolutely glorious. I love the portrayal of both L and Light, how childish they are with their wants. The love/hate relationship was exceptional and just...wow.

Well written, although confusing and ooc, especially the whole Misa deal.

It kinda bored me to be honest./

One of the most beautiful things I have ever read. Thank you.

I had to go to a birthday party half way through chapter 13, and I spent the entire night wanting to come home because I needed to finish this.

It's amazing. Addictive. Absolutely perfect. Light is so, so horrible, but he's also completely and utterly in character. Honestly? I am in love with your writing style.