 Storyseeker 2009-04-29 . chapter 1Nice chapter... Erika seems a little too mature for a 5 yr old in this fic though. I used to babysit small kids a lot, so I know a little about them. Most, if not all, of the 5 yr olds I ever saw would have started blubbering the second if Fang ever talked to them the way he did to Erika.
I can't help wondering if Robyn and Dingo would have really stayed with the squad after their kid was born. I mean, Matrix and Yama are cool, but Fang... Now, I admit he is one of my fave characters, but if I had kids, I wouldn't let anyone like him anywhere near them. With his background, not to mention his attitude and personality (made all the more verile when he spoke to Erika), I'd hardly call him the 'uncle' type. |