The story is pretty well written, and it's an interesting concept. I look forward to seeing more chapters and where this goes.

The story is very promising. It has complicity; as Jin has implied, physical strength alone is not sufficient to survive in modern society. You have done a very good job at making Jin a very unlikeable (and probably hateful) character, but that is also my critic because it seems entirely one-sided. But given Ranma's intellect and his ability to make enemy out of anyone, that is as expected.

Hopefully, we will get to know why Sayaka committed suicide and why Jin deliberately make himself hateful. Afterall, normal people just don't act like that.

Oh, and please fix up the grammar on your story. It is very awkward and difficult to read.

GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Ranko should look as a new type of tranning.

Very nice story.

Like your take on the whole Ranma-chan fiction idea, rather then being a gradual prefference from his side it's forced on him from others.

And i really, i mean really, want to smash Jin's face with something hard :|

A very nice chapter that brings out some of the new characters personalities. I hope to see a new chapter soon.

Excellent.

I'm liking the story so far. Not really sure what the whole situation is about, but I think that is the point at this stage. Thank you for sharing and I look forward to more.

A creative imagitive story, I look forward to your next chapter.

Chapter one, forgot the first bit was the prologue...you forgot to rename the chapter tabs. Anyway. This is clicking pretty good here. I haven't been back in the Ranma scene for maybe a year now, and this was a welcome find that's for sure. While this doesn't feel Nabiki centric, there's enough of her in this to placate me. Curses, you're trying to get other authors back into the fold aren't you.

Hmm, this is starting out with an interesting little quirk. Onto chapter 2, see where you take this thing. ;)

Like it so far. Can't wait to see where ya take it. Like how ya played nabs off. Hope Ranma and Sayaka well be able to talk so. There's something about that Jin guy I don't trust. Hope to see more soon.

Nice, I remember this from TFF, nice to see an update for it even if its not really an update for me.

Not horrible.

Ah, excellent. Like I said before, I just hope Ranma will be able to hide his earnings from Nabiki.

The format of this story is nicely written with little grammar/spelling mistakes. I don't know about Ranma being worried that his curse might get out in public though...after all in the martial arts gymnastics competition he clearly didn't care if people recognized him/her when he gave not only his real name, but his last name as well in front of a huge audience (while in female form).

Then again if word got out through the media many doctors/scientists would want to 'experiment' on him/her...

The story itself is well written, everyone stays IC or at least as close as possible to IC. But I am not sure about Ranma even considering being an actress...when the gambling king came to claim his dues Ranma showed that he could hardly even keep a straight face while playing...how the heck would he even learn to act?

I'll keep an eye on this fic nontheless. ^^