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Reviews for: Isolation
Master Metallix
2009-05-29 . chapter 1
All right, this was great! I can actually see this happening some time in the future for the Babylon Rogues if they aren't careful. I've got just one question:
"However, the mighty bird was capable of holding his own against pathetic human cops, easily decapitating them in just a few swings."
You said that Storm was "decapitating" the cops with his punches; is he actually knocking their heads off and killing them?
Besides that curiosity, I enjoyed this one-shot quite a bit. Let's see some more of these in the future, okay?
SupergamerGreg79
2009-04-29 . chapter 1
Well, this was one of the most tragic oneshots I've ever read. You've done a great job. Sad to see what happened to Wave and Storm, and then to Jet. Good job.
Valenor
2009-04-29 . chapter 1
-_-...this is heavy as The Four Hero Army. I can't stand to see my favourite characters die...not like this.

Although however...you are amazing at writing this story, and I can accept that. :)
Josky
2009-04-29 . chapter 1
Damn... violent and depressing... but well-written... I approve.
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