PLEASE start this up again

hmmm, nice.

However, the world where he learns how to travel inter-universe thanks to the "bookworms"... he should have learnt about the risks of getting cancer or radiation overdoses as well.

Hope it's curable or treatable in some way... AND that he gets hold of a replacement wand pretty soon... somehow :s

My only complaint is i feel you should have ended it with the line from Sirius to Cassi. Hey, wanna go masturbate first?"

Perfect! Fits in greatly with the other story. The only major problem I spotted was
Sirius knew that at that time hi8s world had been preoccupied with fighting an evil dark lord. There had been no time to create such beautiful parks.

It took me a few seconds to figure out what hi8s was. At first I thought it was heights and you were doing the texting lingo for some reason, but I eventually figured it out that it was just an added 8 (I felt kinda dumb after that bit of obviousness
I think you should do the fire world you wer talking about. I can just see sirius, he walks through the portal, everything is on fire, he thinks he's been transported to hell, then he has to dodge the crazy evil fire people while charging the veil to get the hell out of there. lol. It makes me laugh just to think about how he'd probably literally piss himself (of course it would be on purpose to put out the nonexistant fire on his legs hehe
I hope you keep adding to this story as well as to the main story. I'll add it to my story alert, just incase.)

Awesome. Please update. Pretty please?

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that was totally and utterly heartbreaking. Gahhh, and I LIKE angst. But that was just... gah. Nnnn. Siriusssss, be haaaaappy.

Its wonderful, though I am waiting for an update of the world that waits.

wow, i liked this short little oneshot.
part of me hopes, that if Harry and Sirius ever get back to the portal, that they end up in this world, even if just for a day.-TCM

Thanks for showing us the world with Sirius as a girl. It seems so perfect as to be unreal, but I think that's the point.

Brilliant little companion piece; could do well on its own or as a part of a mini-series equally. It all depends on whether you want to write it.

It's refreshing sometimes to have a little slice of utopia now and again.

Many thanks,

Tom

lol. That was great. The interaction between Sirius and Cassi was hilarious. Your humor is excellent. I love your work, so keep it up!

you could pop in some crossovers...

...sorry just finished tsubasa and am thinking about it too much...

...fai and sirius pranking kuro-tan...

you could have him go to
1Justice League

2Dragon Ball Z

3Artemis Fowl

I had wondered how this world would be. When you mentioned it in your other story, I had started to imagine things. Lol, it was fun to read.

that's so sad! So close to happiness but unable to enjoy it. Good fic.