LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON

please continue there needs to be more fanfics out there...

Oh vicious... Update!

Hey, I like; and whether you consider them separate one-parters, or 2 chapters in a story, either way, it works. I did want to point out a tiny little spelling error though... I know you meant "stocking" but you typed "stoking" which is a different word entirely...was a bit...confusing for me the 1st time through that sentence. (I'm weird, I know, but I really do depend on the spelling of words to know what's meant by them! I'm probably the only native English speaker in the world with that problem.
Anyway, I hope that there is either Chapter 3, or Part 3, coming up soon. (Patience never was one of my virtues.)

this is great. a kiss or some sort of sexual tension would be great right about now! :D

Okay, I have to say I agree with popular opinion ... you MUST continue this story. It is just not acceptable to leave us hanging like this ... ahhhhhh the drama! I really enjoyed the first two; so please, please, please write more soon! Thanks mucho!

This is really good! I love Trorys! Update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!

hey really good continue and aslo i liked the first chap better than the 2nd definetly lol but please continue and make it in to like a real story not that this isn't butyou get my jest right?

Nice. LOL Im loving this

i liked it! hopefully u will continue!)

that's what i'm trying to do right now. btw, english is my third language sooo...

The story content is very good! This is grammatically really bad! Where did you learn to write? arg every line high school?(sorry, but I have to recall that putting too many 'args' is deadwood (used to much).
Come on, how many 'arg's are you going to put in there. I mean I like everything but the gammer,spelling and the arg! I love your story line and content but please fix it!

The stories are good...please continue soon!)

ooh! that sounds like a really good idea. i vote that you go ahead with the whole shory story thing. maybe you could even have some 2 part-ers if you have a huge inspiration. Also, cuz im lazy im just gonna say right here that Last school day, and that summer are really good. You should really update that summer though, any trory goodness makes my day.

i think you need some more on this i want to know what happens