Aw, that was really sad. I liked how you put Mag's battle of how it was a lose/lose situation, and her wanting of him to stay. That was very depressing, in a good way.

*evil cackle* Once again, you deliver the best. I fall in love with Mag even more every time I read one of your stories, and that's really saying something because I was smitten with her when I began *sigh*. I'm not good with names, but I do know writing styles, and yours speaks for itself, even if (I) you don't read the name of the author. Only a few can capture that skill and you are blessed with it. Hope to hear more from you soon!

I read this on LJ and it's still just as awesome. Natha/Mag is so cute. And I love the opening scene, with Nate being all depressed and like life is over.

Ohmygosh.

Just - yes. That was all kinds of perfect. You've completely converted me to a Nathan/Mag shipper, congratulations.

This was juicy. I loved that Mag was trying to be senseible but gave into her weakness in the end. This was hot. But it made me sad for Mag in the end.

Fantastic! I love where you went with the storyline and just this pairing in general. Very well written, kudos ;)