Ahaha1 The end was hilarious! "At least he wouldn't die a virgin!"

Sweet. I love Soul's last thought, although I'm surprised he didn't die sooner... Ah, well, I liked it!

very nice.

I enjoyed the hell out of that one.

a very realistic orgasm for Maka as well.

I only have one question.

What was Spirit doing in their house?

I thought they lived together with Blair in Maka's mama's house, and Daddy didn't.

I could be wrong... I have only seen the anime and that didn't really do into detail.

i loved it! you should write and contune of it! i wanna see what happens with papa and soul!

i like the ending its funny

Hahah that was pretty nice
I loved the part where he's like at least I won't die virgin ! Haha the best !

Lol, poor Soul!

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this was hilarious! :D

I love the ending! AMAZING! HAHAHAHA

thats awsome, cuz dieing a virgin sooo wouldnt have been cool)

hahahahahahaha
that was sooooo funny, a fav for sure...

"At least i won't die as a virgin." rofl that was the last thought Soul Eater Evans had before he died a short painful death...R.I.P xDDD

ahaha i love the ending.

that was funny,as in,i loved it,haha

lol, love the ending