Aw, that was such a sad and good chapter! I have to say, his crying scene is the saddest one I have ever seen! Really good job! :)

That was so sad! I started crying!! :( Poor Christian!!

This was great! Please update soon!

I love it! It's so good! Please finish up the story! :)

This is really good! Please update soon!

Update soon please! This is awesome!

This is so good!

This is really good! I enjoy your interpritation of the story! In my story I'm at the same point as you, and I'll make sure it's not completely like yours! ;) good job, write more!

THIS IS SO SAD! *sobs*

SO...SAD! *sob sob*
It gave me shivers when i read it. Good job!

I love it! Please update soon!

~Elphie

I really like this! Are you going to write more?