OMG! finish the story! I loved it! please finish it!

( write more! write more! i like this story

this was gr8

cool story! Hey, do you know the author of the poem?

This poem is awosome. I love things like this.:) Sorry sometimes I can be bad with words.

This is really good. :]

The only thing is that Jonah really has blue eyes, not brown. But other than that this rawks so far! X3

oh, I actually like this story, at first I was sceptical but I'm glad I gave it a chance. oh and there's just one thing that's bugging me, Jonah has really blue eyes, not brown, sorry if that's annoying but screwed up facts make me twich especially on Haunting in Connecticut... _''