 NO!!!!! 2009-08-31 . chapter 1 NO :(
sequle? |
 Doubleblade Miriko 2009-07-27 . chapter 1I love the last words of this fic. Well written, easy to read, I love your stories! Don't never stop writing! |
 Lake25 2009-05-28 . chapter 1oh...
so nice...well not story-ending-like...but nice...
is there any sense to what i'm writing or does it sound as crazy as i think it is?
anyway, very nice written^^
ciao^^ |
 Clouded Horizon 2009-05-06 . chapter 1Nice one. Very atmospheric, and the description and dialogue were both nicely efficient. I loved it. :)
~clouded horizon~ |
 TheOneThatIsAddictedToHPfics 2009-05-05 . chapter 1loved it! |
 Aimael 2009-05-05 . chapter 1This is... wow. I love it. I get this weird, anticipating feeling while reading, and the last line was... mmh. ^^
I have no words. This goes to favs. Thank you.
Aimael |
 CunningMascara 2009-05-02 . chapter 1 It turned out beautifully. :D |
 Eeek... 2009-04-30 . chapter 1 That was just brilliant...It works the first time as the words from an unknown assailant, even if it seemed slightly familiar; but once I knew it was Yassen - ...O.O
His words made so much sense once reread, all the 'Alex's, the knowing way he spoke of a spy's life, and the flourish of the “Just pull the damn trigger, Gregorovitch." at the end...
Sheer, entire, crushing brilliance, one that makes me aware of my own overwhelming inadequacy in writing.
Can I add my pleas as well for a sequel? |
 Jade Taylor 2009-04-30 . chapter 1Wow. I didn't see that coming. I liked this. Kind of wish I knew why Yassdn was killing him, but I know it wouldn't have fit in this story. |
 Nyxelestia 2009-04-30 . chapter 1I really love the interaction between Alex and Gregorovitch in this one...especially at the end. Like that whole 'familiarity' thing, but the last name adds the professional tone to it.
And - love the use of the last name. I always ticked me off that Alex used his first name, even when it was in the books.
Awesome prompt response. Better than mines. ^_^ Which I still have to edit...ah, well - can't wait to see what you do for May. ^_^ |
 Castaway5 2009-04-30 . chapter 1Ah, very good. |
 Jusmine 2009-04-30 . chapter 1God I love this story. If, you know, you didn't get that before. ^_^
It's a good thing that I'd already written my Reaper when I read this the first time - reading Ara's before writing mine almost made me not write it, and reading this one, too? Yeah. Buh-bye my Reaper! *grin*
Anyway, again, this is amazing! ^_^ |
 Wolfmonster 2009-04-30 . chapter 1 Aww - that was just so...good! I love the last line - and the way Yassen is still reluctant to kill him, and they're having a proper 'I know you have to do it and I am sorry / I forgive you' kind of conversation.
Great! |
 vballmania23 2009-04-30 . chapter 1Amazing! I love the ending - people usuall have Alex teaming up with Yassen, and it was great to see the opposite here. |
 camnstarr4eva 2009-04-30 . chapter 1Euah! Don't shoot him!
Hee. That's the third 'Reaper' fic I've read and they are all completely different and brilliant. I think this prompt thing was a great idea, I can't remember if it was yours or Jusmines...
Your fic was the darkest I think, and I loved how you worked the identity of the gunman in slowly, subtle enough to produce a shock at the end. Bravo! :) |