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I love you for writing this! Please continue!~!

For a girl who doesnt have the game, I honestly cant say if this is bad or not. But, I like it. XD

It cracks me up that you renamed your Ari 'Francis' I named mine Sora... Francis is a cool name though. ^^ Keep up the awesome work!

HAHA! This is awesome! Seriously I kept wondering how they were like 'good job son!'. Keep on writing, I want to know what happens after they meet the Princess in that ocean village... It froze whenever I tried passing that.

I really like your story so far.It seems the characters seem to be very in character so far,which as a okage fan I really appreciate.I hope you keep at it in both continuing the story and striving to keep the characters as in character as possible.As a side note I rather like the name Ari and have never thought of it as sounding girly because its just a shortening of the name Aaron,and Aaron is actually a masculine name,though now a days some girls seem to be given boy names for some weird reason.