this is too short! a nice story like this should be made longer...

what a cute story and happy ending!

aww..that was rally cute and sweet.. :D

Hello. I love your story and I can't wait to read your others stories about them. So soon, I hope.

Loved it!

oww..shucks, nice story! :3

How sweet...I even imagined Kurama so worried there, _

well done!

I absolutely love your stories! I'm going down the line and I love how you put Botan with either Hiei or Kurama. I love those pairings and I absolutely hate her with Koenma (b/c honestly, i'm in love with Koenma). Your style of writing is unique and you suck me in very well! I look forward to MOAR!

wow, the story is quite endearing indeed

Very sweet. Nicely done!-D101

Reminds me of this line by John Oxenham that I wrote in my introduction for the Botan shrine"For death begins with life's first breath, and life begins at touch of death.
Great story.)